Comments on: Creative Recount/Retell…. motivation…Carried Away clip http://room19eps.edublogs.org/2008/03/18/creative-recountretell-motivationcarried-away-clip/ Just another Edublogs.org weblog Thu, 26 Jun 2008 23:32:46 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: JM and JK http://room19eps.edublogs.org/2008/03/18/creative-recountretell-motivationcarried-away-clip/comment-page-1/#comment-25 JM and JK Wed, 07 May 2008 00:31:53 +0000 http://room19eps.edublogs.org/2008/03/18/creative-recountretell-motivationcarried-away-clip/#comment-25 Lovely writing JC. It think it had lots of language features and I agree with Max. Lovely writing JC. It think it had lots of language features and I agree with Max.

]]> By: missadamson http://room19eps.edublogs.org/2008/03/18/creative-recountretell-motivationcarried-away-clip/comment-page-1/#comment-18 missadamson Mon, 07 Apr 2008 21:33:24 +0000 http://room19eps.edublogs.org/2008/03/18/creative-recountretell-motivationcarried-away-clip/#comment-18 Well Done JC. We loved the description that you used in your recount. We liked how you described in detail what was happening and also how you felt. It created a picture in our classes minds. Keep up the amazing writing. Room 21 :) Well Done JC. We loved the description that you used in your recount. We liked how you described in detail what was happening and also how you felt. It created a picture in our classes minds.

Keep up the amazing writing. Room 21 :)

]]> By: Max Wang http://room19eps.edublogs.org/2008/03/18/creative-recountretell-motivationcarried-away-clip/comment-page-1/#comment-17 Max Wang Sat, 05 Apr 2008 05:42:43 +0000 http://room19eps.edublogs.org/2008/03/18/creative-recountretell-motivationcarried-away-clip/#comment-17 justin wrote a good story because he used lots of similes and metaphor, and it was very interesting. justin wrote a good story because he used lots of similes and metaphor, and it was very interesting.

]]> By: Miss Signal http://room19eps.edublogs.org/2008/03/18/creative-recountretell-motivationcarried-away-clip/comment-page-1/#comment-11 Miss Signal Wed, 19 Mar 2008 10:27:03 +0000 http://room19eps.edublogs.org/2008/03/18/creative-recountretell-motivationcarried-away-clip/#comment-11 Wow! This is a fantastic narrative recount! I am so impressed by your use of descriptive language to paint pictures in my mind. I could imagine all these things happening. I look forward to reading some more of your work JC. A great first blog post! Miss S. :) Wow! This is a fantastic narrative recount! I am so impressed by your use of descriptive language to paint pictures in my mind. I could imagine all these things happening. I look forward to reading some more of your work JC. A great first blog post! Miss S. :)

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